Oh, man!! Got totally sidetracked by real life after reading the first two chapters and thinking that was it.....JUST got around to finishing and...HOLY HELL, THAT WAS FREAKIN' AMAZING!!
The whole exhibitionist thing with the spanking was just incredibly hot, hot, hot......but then you lapsed into that almost poetically beautiful ending and, I swear, I had tears in my eyes by the end -- it was SO beautiful and SO intense. The reverence and awe you had the OCs feeling??? It totally leaped right off the page and made ME cry with the intensity of it. The whole one soul/two people passage??? I was done!
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The whole exhibitionist thing with the spanking was just incredibly hot, hot, hot......but then you lapsed into that almost poetically beautiful ending and, I swear, I had tears in my eyes by the end -- it was SO beautiful and SO intense. The reverence and awe you had the OCs feeling??? It totally leaped right off the page and made ME cry with the intensity of it. The whole one soul/two people passage??? I was done!
Superb story!