“I was going to grab a pizza, but you know… this is better.”
That was just horrifying but really made me laugh!

Personally, I'm not opposed to the dirtybadwrong in fiction (as long as appropriate warnings are observed), there's not much I won't read (except het or RPF but even then I've dabbled) and lot of the stuff that comes out of my head when I'm writing scares the bejebus out of me but you even managed to make me feel uncomfortable using the idea that the girl liked it. Just awful.
This is a compliment btw! This is a really good scene. I'm now profoundly worried about the boys : ( x