No apology or explanation necessary! I read a lot on LJ and AO3 and it's super refreshing when I find stuff that's a little left field or takes me out of my comfort zone and that doesn't happen very often! Besides, the point of this scene (kind of?) is to shock the reader a bit, make them feel uncomfortable so the fact you did that to me is a) awesome as it does all the things you want it to in terms of narrative, b) really is a credit to you that you covered a whole skyscrapers worth of levels of squick, and most importantly c) means I'm not so inured to this stuff that I'm dead inside...Yay! Please don't worry or say sorry for writing something so well. You warned the crap out of this so...Caveat Lector x
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I read a lot on LJ and AO3 and it's super refreshing when I find stuff that's a little left field or takes me out of my comfort zone and that doesn't happen very often!
Besides, the point of this scene (kind of?) is to shock the reader a bit, make them feel uncomfortable so the fact you did that to me is a) awesome as it does all the things you want it to in terms of narrative, b) really is a credit to you that you covered a whole skyscrapers worth of levels of squick, and most importantly c) means I'm not so inured to this stuff that I'm dead inside...Yay!
Please don't worry or say sorry for writing something so well. You warned the crap out of this so...Caveat Lector x