Wow. Just.... Wow. I have so much to say, this one was just. Well. You have left me speechless, Sugar. You absolutely never disappoint, but this time you really outdid yourself. It was so *full* just stuffed full of everything. All the emotion and the heat and the story telling that you do so very well.
I adored watching Sam and Dean buy any and everything they wanted in the grocery store. And seeing it juxtaposed with the sadness and hurt Sam has when he realizes that Dean went without food. (BTW, so very perfect that you found kwashiorkor and its literal translation.) That gutwrenching pain Sam felt for Dean, uck, just broke me in the best way. But having it be what really proves Dean's love for Sam was beautiful. It's always mentioned in fics almost in passing, like it's no big deal, but for Dean, who was really still a kid himself to go hungry for Sam - that is a VERY big deal. He was just always that devoted to his Sammy. I love these two so much, and the way you write them just makes me so happy!
Ok...now lets talk porns, because, Fucking Hell, that was hot. I LOVED that you used a little daddy kink, and that you get it has NOTHING to do with John. It was perfect...and dammit woman, you so owe me panties! Dean coming in his pants from Sammy just saying it...then the way they played with it during sex. Well, in Dean's words "Jesus fucking Christ." And, you are gonna just kill me...Dean saying he wants to suck Sam off while people watch...Why do I get the feeling that club is going to come into play? If not, I have no doubts you are going to give us that at some point. I will have back up panties ready for that one ;)
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I adored watching Sam and Dean buy any and everything they wanted in the grocery store. And seeing it juxtaposed with the sadness and hurt Sam has when he realizes that Dean went without food. (BTW, so very perfect that you found kwashiorkor and its literal translation.) That gutwrenching pain Sam felt for Dean, uck, just broke me in the best way. But having it be what really proves Dean's love for Sam was beautiful. It's always mentioned in fics almost in passing, like it's no big deal, but for Dean, who was really still a kid himself to go hungry for Sam - that is a VERY big deal. He was just always that devoted to his Sammy. I love these two so much, and the way you write them just makes me so happy!
Ok...now lets talk porns, because, Fucking Hell, that was hot. I LOVED that you used a little daddy kink, and that you get it has NOTHING to do with John. It was perfect...and dammit woman, you so owe me panties! Dean coming in his pants from Sammy just saying it...then the way they played with it during sex. Well, in Dean's words "Jesus fucking Christ." And, you are gonna just kill me...Dean saying he wants to suck Sam off while people watch...Why do I get the feeling that club is going to come into play? If not, I have no doubts you are going to give us that at some point. I will have back up panties ready for that one ;)