Oh my gosh! That was absolutely incredible! The awe and wonder that they see in each other is amazing- the fact that they love each other so much and trust each other so freely is beautiful.
I really loved the fact that although things are looking up, we can't forget the bad- John, the demons, Sam's ordeal, Azazel, etc.
I think personally, the whole bit about having enough money for food was really, really touching.
I like that although you focus on the good, you don't shy away from the bad. You focus on their love, but you've made sure to show Sam's pain, Sam's torture, the sadism of the demons. It's all a perspective, and having the bad as potent as the good puts everything to scale.
As always, a very very good chapter- I can literally feel the angst piling up to come into the story soon!
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Date: 2013-06-06 11:27 pm (UTC)I really loved the fact that although things are looking up, we can't forget the bad- John, the demons, Sam's ordeal, Azazel, etc.
I think personally, the whole bit about having enough money for food was really, really touching.
I like that although you focus on the good, you don't shy away from the bad. You focus on their love, but you've made sure to show Sam's pain, Sam's torture, the sadism of the demons. It's all a perspective, and having the bad as potent as the good puts everything to scale.
As always, a very very good chapter- I can literally feel the angst piling up to come into the story soon!