Thank you! I took a lot of time with these two chapters (well, actually three, since I've been working on the material for these two with the other chapter, but broke the one long chapter down into three). And this one in particular I planned and wrote very carefully, with the special motif in the last half (pay attention!) and balancing all the various crises and resolutions. Thank you for noticing!
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Date: 2015-11-05 08:08 pm (UTC)